VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.1 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[seaoflove]

Hopefully Holly's family will be added to the cast soon, and will be met by Ian & Lena, and the others and not be just an off screen character anymore.

I can see them being varying levels of awful, but also possibly good depending on who they are meeting and how much Holly has changed or not. They are supposedly very christian / conservative.

Faithful Good Guy Ian + Holly: I can see them being warm and friendly to Ian in this scenario. He is a writer like her. He is not a player sleeping around a lot. He seems pretty respectable. They may even encourage him to marry Holly. I can see them liking him even more if Holly is unchanged and not trying to be Lena 2.0, and liking him a lot less if he has other women and won't commit to Holly.

Lena + Holly: I don't see them accepting their daughter being a lesbian at least not at first. This is a big "Maybe" on them being accepting. I think it would need to be a version of Lena that didn't doing the onlyfans stuff, and isn't fucking a bunch of other people and even then its a long shot, but they probably won't like Lena no matter what unless she is just a friend of Holly and not romancing her.

Lena + Ian + Holly: I don't see them accepting their daughter being a part of some guys harem of women. I see them kicking Holly out of the house, and Lena + Ian + Holly having to get their own place together.

Ivy + Holly: Ivy has introduced their beloved daughter to drugs, promiscuity, glory holes, onlyfans and all levels of sin. I can see this getting physically violent possibly ending in Ivy getting murdered by them. People have been murdered for less.

Stan + Holly: Stan is completely non threatening, he makes good money, and is a bit of a nerd. I can definitely see Holly's family loving and welcoming Stan in with open arms.

 

[Leonard Verandez]

disagree, as ive said in the past this game becomes loads more fun when you skip thru lenas snoozefest turboslut life segments and focus solely on ian as a fun dating simulator.

Lol there's enough male protagonists on this website to build a whole library of babel of Kama Sutras. People want more Lena content. The game is MUCH more fun when you skip Ian's boring vanilla dating bullshit and enjoy Lena's corruption/slut romp.

 

[XJ347]

Written like someone who has never had a conversation with an actual woman... Piss off back to Andrew Tate's Discord you incel loser.

LOL I felt the same way reading that post. Crazy spouting nonsense off as if it's fact. Delusional.

 

[Hungover00]

Lol there's enough male protagonists on this website to build a whole library of babel of Kama Sutras. People want more Lena content. The game is MUCH more fun when you skip Ian's boring vanilla dating bullshit and enjoy Lena's corruption/slut romp.

Why not play the game as it is? You both are exhausting to read.

 

[Hungover00]

Hopefully Holly's family will be added to the cast soon, and will be met by Ian & Lena, and the others and not be just an off screen character anymore.

I can see them being varying levels of awful, but also possibly good depending on who they are meeting and how much Holly has changed or not. They are supposedly very christian / conservative.

Faithful Good Guy Ian + Holly: I can see them being warm and friendly to Ian in this scenario. He is a writer like her. He is not a player sleeping around a lot. He seems pretty respectable. They may even encourage him to marry Holly. I can see them liking him even more if Holly is unchanged and not trying to be Lena 2.0, and liking him a lot less if he has other women and won't commit to Holly.

Lena + Holly: I don't see them accepting their daughter being a lesbian at least not at first. This is a big "Maybe" on them being accepting. I think it would need to be a version of Lena that didn't doing the onlyfans stuff, and isn't fucking a bunch of other people and even then its a long shot, but they probably won't like Lena no matter what unless she is just a friend of Holly and not romancing her.

Lena + Ian + Holly: I don't see them accepting their daughter being a part of some guys harem of women. I see them kicking Holly out of the house, and Lena + Ian + Holly having to get their own place together.

Ivy + Holly: Ivy has introduced their beloved daughter to drugs, promiscuity, glory holes, onlyfans and all levels of sin. I can see this getting physically violent possibly ending in Ivy getting murdered by them. People have been murdered for less.

Stan + Holly: Stan is completely non threatening, he makes good money, and is a bit of a nerd. I can definitely see Holly's family loving and welcoming Stan in with open arms.

Why have more of her family? She just needs to leave the nest on all playthroughs. And all of the characters families are rather distant (we still haven't seen Ian's mom), though Lena's situation has the most involvement, and it's the most boring part of the game (imo). The main reason it's there is to be a money sink, a nexus for drama, and leverage for Seymour.

 

[seaoflove]

Why have more of her family? She just needs to leave the nest on all playthroughs. And all of the characters families are rather distant (we still haven't seen Ian's mom), though Lena's situation has the most involvement, and it's the most boring part of the game (imo). The main reason it's there is to be a money sink, a nexus for drama, and leverage for Seymour.

Ian lives in an apartment with his buddy Perry.
Lena has 2 room mates Stan & Louise.

Both of them have already "Left the nest." They are independent adults, and Lena is even supporting her parents financially.

Is Holly the same? No...

Holly still lives at home with Mom & Dad!
Holly is literally currently grounded because her parents found her birth control pills!

"Leaving the nest" won't be so simply for Holly, or else she would have done it by now.

I understand how you can think having the characters parents be a part of the story is boring, but I think that it adds depth to the characters when done correctly and in moderation.

We have seen many days in the life of Ian.

We have seen many days in the life of Lena.

We have seen 0 days in the life of Holly. 0... Not one. At least not her normal day to day life. Yes, we get her away on vacation for a couple of days at the beach, or for the writing thing when you first sleep with her as Ian. But those are not normal day to day days for Holly. Those are "Holly on vacation" or "Holly on a work trip".

Does her mother still do the laundry for Holly? We don't know.
How did they find the birth control pills? We don't know.
Do they sit around the table for breakfast / dinner as a family still? We don't know.
Does Holly spend all her time alone in her room isolated? We don't know
What does Holly's room look like is it clean or dirty? We don't know.
How often does Holly get "Grounded"? We don't know.
How many Elephants are in Holly's room? We don't know. We know she likes them, but how much does she like them.

 

[Avaron1974]

I think i would find that kind of VA more interesting if we had an option to choose to play one character over the other at the start. I don't know how many "players" are like me regarding this preference but having several main characters is really not my cup of tea.

It would be fun too if the character we don't decide to play got his choices made kind of randomly.

I do agree.

I enjoy the game but I don't really have any interest in what Ian gets up to. He's only got a choice of the girls I haven't set up with Lena.

It works really well for people that set Ian and Lena up and have their friends and lives intertwined but for anyone that has more interest in one over the other it's like playing 2 separate games.

 

[MixQQ]

Lol there's enough male protagonists on this website to build a whole library of babel of Kama Sutras. People want more Lena content. The game is MUCH more fun when you skip Ian's boring vanilla dating bullshit and enjoy Lena's corruption/slut romp.

Both MC are boring. Dev can't even create a proper MMF/DP for Lena not to mention gangbang scenes. There is hope it will finally happen on this trip with Jeremy and Billy. Generally her whole slutty path is too vanilla compared to other games i played

Ian it's a true symbol of vanilla. Wish pussy destroyer King Axel replaced him as a MC

 

[Bushy]

Chad Ian pounding Louise like a mini axel

 

[Asmodean2]

It would make sense if Ivy/Ian hooking up would happen before the Ian/Jeremy fight in the tournament - that way (if he finds out about it) Jeremy has some additional motivation...maybe the fight would be harder then?

 

[SearingFive]

It would make sense if Ivy/Ian hooking up would happen before the Ian/Jeremy fight in the tournament - that way (if he finds out about it) Jeremy has some additional motivation...maybe the fight would be harder then?

Ian is not going to fight Jeremy in the tournament, they are in a different weight division bracket. It will probably be Mike or some rando like we got in the first round.

 

[Nifferman]

It would make sense if Ivy/Ian hooking up would happen before the Ian/Jeremy fight in the tournament - that way (if he finds out about it) Jeremy has some additional motivation...maybe the fight would be harder then?

Different weight class buddy. Ian is a FW or a WW whereas Jeremy is a MW or a LHW. And Jeremy is always cool with Ian fucking around, he even gives him a high-five if Ian had a 3some with Louise and Lena.

 

[SerHawkes]

Ian is not going to fight Jeremy in the tournament, they are in a different weight division bracket. It will probably be Mike or some rando like we got in the first round.

Maybe. Though many are wanting the fight to happen so it's possible. Much like Jeremy waking up naked in a field, with Ian there sitting on a rock, recounting to Jeremy how Jasmin made Jeremy her bitch for the night. Still a chance.

 

[bauman]

I thought the update was solid. Cindy's different paths were nuanced and well-written, and Minerva's scene was great because it finally pushed her story forward, making her feel like a 'proper' love interest for Ian. But I liked the most how the dev wrote Louise's scene. It was the highlight of the update for me since it elevated an annoying character, and the buildup to it over the last couple of chapters was very well done as well.

 

[SearingFive]

Maybe. Though many are wanting the fight to happen so it's possible. Much like Jeremy waking up naked in a field, with Ian there sitting on a rock, recounting to Jeremy how Jasmin made Jeremy her bitch for the night. Still a chance.

Well sadly we are not going to get a tournament fight with Jeremy, once the bracket and weigh ins are done, it's locked. Street fight? Sure.

 

[SerHawkes]

Well sadly we are not going to get a tournament fight with Jeremy, once the bracket and weigh ins are done, it's locked. Street fight? Sure.

Street fight over the fact that Ian shacked up with Ivy before him... I can see it. Would love to knock his stupid ass down a peg or two.

Speaking of pegging... Perry should ask Cherry to peg him.

 

[fatpussy123]

Street fight over the fact that Ian shacked up with Ivy before him... I can see it. Would love to knock his stupid ass down a peg or two.

Might be the other way around now. Jeremy is going on the Billy trip with Ivy and Lena. Ian is going to have to wait till after the trip to see Ivy again.

 

[MagicMan753]

I wish the louise Ian path started sooner. She is so beautiful and lovable. Her scene was amazing.

But unfortunately we are reaching the end of the game and she will be going out of town for a bit. Just wished we got more of this relationship earlier.

 

[SerHawkes]

I wish the louise Ian path started sooner.

A lot of things could have happened sooner. Trouble is Ek has major skill issues in handling her own work, more so giving her patrons what they want over her own true desire to write her own story. And because of that, this "story" is so muddled and mired with completely bullshit it's starks in contrast to EKs own claims that she didn't want to turn this game into another GGGB. Yet she has done so.

 

[Gicoo]

But I liked the most how the dev wrote Louise's scene. It was the highlight of the update for me since it elevated an annoying character, and the buildup to it over the last couple of chapters was very well done as well.

What did you liked about it? It was fairly generic. They meet, they fuck. No explanation why they are interested in each other. Louise is still the most rushed love interest on Ians side.