VN Ren'Py Peace of Mind: Watcher's Eye [Prologue Day 2] [Silent J Games]

[Love MILF!]

No drugs? No violence? Yes, that's the protagonist I want!

 

[ar1122]

Me after reading the " Not gonna happen so don’t ask for it " part,

very sympathic dev finally someone shows some mind here, hope game goes well

 

[ar1122]

confused wish there was a charakter wt, who is the aunt now``??

 

[andymon]

Hi guys! (Sorry for my english - not my native language) But.. Alleluja! The characters, their expression, the body language.. really a masterpiece! Yes, he plot till now is trite, but the show is really enjoyable! And real funny! My compliments to Silent J !!!

 

[Valcry]

how many divine orbs to get this watchers eye?

 

[a1fox3]

confused wish there was a charakter wt, who is the aunt now``??

The one that calls on the phone and ask that her daughter stays with MC and if set it up right she is MC cousin that comes to stay with him.

 

[Xo Mo]

One minor thing that would need maybe 3-4 re-renders... The first dinner at Michelle's... after dinner, replace the plates with empty plates/plates with food residue on them. Having untouched meals when saying the food was great makes no sense, breaks the immersion a bit.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

MC's a bit of a Gary Sue.

I like Melanie's daytime looks, kinda an uptight prim and proper kinda vibe. I thought she might be the (oddly young) mother from when I read the description and looked at the screens. Natasha is a babe and nicely dolled up (though not sure how well looking so luxurious fits with being a supposedly neglected child), Ashley was great too, but...

...How'd Ashley go from this to this:
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Looks like a completely different character, not a fan of the change if that wasn't clear.... if anyone needed a makeover it was Lacey who sometimes looks alright, but sometimes not.

Thank you! This is the critique I wanted to see from the change. I admit I was worried about her change, but wanted to give her an HD look. I might post a poll to see which direction it goes, but my gut is to backtrack her change. Now if you just meant the hair, it's more of a weekend casual look, her hair is still the same, just tied up.

You would be correct from assuming Mel is a bit prim and proper by nature, but she is no mother (yet, if at all), she is at most a few years older than the MC.

Nat is neglected, true, but I never said poor, nor wealthy. But that will be addressed later.

And how dare you good sir! Lacey is one of the few characters that actually came out exactly as I envisioned her. We shall duel at dawn!

Now on to the Gary Sue allegation. First of all, I had to look that up. I admit I watch anime, but wasn't aware of that term, or many others by the looks of it. But I fail to see why you would reach that conclusion. Could you elaborate? I would be interested in your point of view.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

One minor thing that would need maybe 3-4 re-renders... The first dinner at Michelle's... after dinner, replace the plates with empty plates/plates with food residue on them. Having untouched meals when saying the food was great makes no sense, breaks the immersion a bit.

Well f&%k me! Good catch. It will probably be fixed gradually over time.

 

[Enigemm]

To be quite honest, I prefer Ashley's previous look. I thought maybe you were trying something out hence I made no comment. I tried my best to compare both looks when I first saw the change and tried drawing similarities...and I'm not talking about the hair do-over as she explained it herself. It's quite the deviation from what we had growing on us as "Ashley". I'm not sure but even without the poll, I think most would rather her reversion than the current.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Can we get a planned tags section??? AKA am i gonna get to watch the twins bang? I personally do not want to fuck my siblings (either IRL or in game) but i would certainly like to watch 2 twins (especially this one) or even just 2 sisters get after it with each other. Conveniently there are a few of those REAL close by. Have we met the twins yet? the neighbor daughters look pretty similar but not identical so i'm not sure.

Edit: Also...Harem? or am i gonna have to pick one? EDIT: Ok, i think the after dinner convo the girls had may have answered this one....Edit3: yeah i'd say about 99.9% chance this is a yes. Now if there's a few future tags I'm hoping for in this it'd be the perfect game.

Planned tags have always been available in the Genre section, as well as tags that will never appear. The game at it's core, and if played as released, is not incest oriented or developed. You can change the relationship to babysitter if you wanted, or even Madam President. The option was placed there to tailor to the reader's own immersive creativity. Later on you will get to see those relationships for what they truly are at their core.

As for the twins/triplets being identical or not, all I will say for now is, fraternal and identical. Cryptic? Maybe, but give me a few updates and you should get your answer to that specific twins question.

**Saw the first was addressed already.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Is there a sample pic somewhere of the Mom and Aunt?
Just curious what the milf's look like.
Thank you

Not yet.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Seems like just your typical male mc power fantasy. Good looking tall MC with a giant dick, every girl wants to bone him day 1. Dude is mega rich, has established LI's that don't care he is with multiple girls. Etc etc.

Renders are fine but story/dialog are preeeeety meh venturing into cringe.

Thanks for trying it out.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Yeah i found what you were referring to. I should have checked genre before i wrote my post...planned tags are already there. I'm so used to planned tags having it's own seperate tab rather than being a subsection in the genre tab. But group sex tag is there. FFM scenes with girls who play with each other in the scene are frequently not tagged with Lesbian. If I see a twins tag I will always double check whether i'm gonna get some twincest of any kind. My favorite possible content on this website and it's relatively rare. So if i see the twins tag I will always ask about it. The very specific writting of No MAN will touch your girls...and then being told no lesbian tag ever is kind of confusing. Makes it sound like group sex scenes might involve at least some degree of FF play, but there will never be any FF only scenes. Im hoping this is what Dev means so i can get at least a little Twincest action, but i think it's about 70-80 percent chance you're right now.

Sorry, and I mean it, but let's bump that up to 100% or 98.99999999% like a paternity test. That's lesbian content or girl on girl, or bi-curiosity.

Side note to anyone who reads this. DO NOT START A DISCUSION ON THIS. I have an upcoming scene that explains this. I foresaw that this would come up, and before I started writing the first day, I wrote a scene for this.

 

[FatYoda]

Sorry, and I mean it, but let's bump that up to 100% or 98.99999999% like a paternity test. That's lesbian content or girl on girl, or bi-curiosity.

Side note to anyone who reads this. DO NOT START A DISCUSION ON THIS. I have an upcoming scene that explains this. I foresaw that this would come up, and before I started writing the first day, I wrote a scene for this.

Damn... I'm quite sad, but it's your game and I'm still looking forward to whatever we get.

 

[robrize2169]

interesting start to the story and i like the mc since he isn't a giant pussy like most other mc's in other games i play. found the new content to be a bit short, seems like the first release lasted longer time wise and told a bit more story than the new update. wanted to see the mc knock the pervy black dude out for his comments about Hailey. then the cops show up? lame. looking forward to the future content which probably won't come much before the winter. lots to play in the meantime though

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

When you can named and set relationship in a game and you can set it to aunt and cousin then the game should have the incest tag.
That scene at the airport where his cousin jumps into his arms and he grabs her ass as they give each other a passionate kiss is so close to incest the tag is needed so far. ((This is the last scene before I had to stop for the day.)) Will play the rest of the game/VN tomorrow.

Mod or uploader the Incest tag is needed.

Under the Dev Notes spoiler we have this: " If you set them as aunt and cousin, that’s on you. Just saying."

"Under the Dev Notes spoiler we have this: " If you set them as aunt and cousin, that’s on you. Just saying.""
That was in response to some very specific question I got, multiple times. But if you think about it, and this is just me thinking out loud using this opportunity (not calling you out or arguing), I made that option available because in most threads people ask for that content, you say no (dev), but why (reader). But then you give them the option to pseudo re-write some part of the story to their own liking ( could be it's their Obi-wan Kenobi or Guru), and you're still f#$k3d. Sorry for the mini rant

 

[FatYoda]

"Under the Dev Notes spoiler we have this: " If you set them as aunt and cousin, that’s on you. Just saying.""
That was in response to some very specific question I got, multiple times. But if you think about it, and this is just me thinking out loud using this opportunity (not calling you out or arguing), I made that option available because in most threads people ask for that content, you say no (dev), but why (reader). But then you give them the option to pseudo re-write some part of the story to their own liking ( could be it's their Obi-wan Kenobi or Guru), and you're still f#$k3d. Sorry for the mini rant

Nah, he's completely wrong anyway. Dev isn't responsible for the actions of the players. You didn't put incest in the game, just gave players the option if they really wanted it. Patreon wouldn't even remove you for this and they're far more strict than F95.

 

[v1900]

Hahahahaha
Somehow I 'am still not convinced that I should help her.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

The "choose relationship" fig leaf is there for a reason, specifically to avoid the incest tag. The default relationship to Hailey's mother is "counselor" (so that is either therapist or lawyer) and Hailey is default "friend". Like you point out, the dev said if you set to a family member that's on you, not the game. I assume this custom of naming relationships spawned from trying to avoid Patreon's ire.

Silent_J_Dev would it be possible to make the starting sequence before you get to the main menu a runonce type of option? Like once we say "yes, I'm 18+, blah blah" then it believes us and remembers next time. I had to start the game to remember Hailey's name and sat here trying to click through all of it and accidentally hit "no" and had to start alllllllll over.

Added Kimberly to my ever expanding List of Heterochromatic AVN Characters. They're everywhere!

The first sentence is a yes and no. It was meant as a telling that it is not an incest game, but you do you. But at the same time to avoid the tag, because I didn't write it as that type of game. Albeit true it is due to Patreon, but once you get further into the game you will see that, even though it works (as in there isn't any weird tells) you will spot some things that won't fit when you take a step back, or maybe will fit but makes more sense when you're not looking at in that sense. The game is being developed with the default relationship as it's true nature.

As for your request, I'll look into it. I'm pretty sure I could.

Heterochromatic eyes are the greatest.