- Jun 13, 2017
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The main issue I noticed with this update was that the dev busted their load too early with the intimacy on previous chapters.View attachment 3961025
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What I mean is that the conversations that happen within this chapter don't feel like they progress the relationships in any meaningful way and essentially just serve to pad out game time and word count, they are a sidegrade at best.
It would've been a different story if we had more of this on previous chapters to build up each relationship before they started to get steamy, but alas that ship has long since sailed.
As it stands I think Eve so far is the better written LI out of all the heroines just because the MC still has to put in some work to get to know her and he still has a lot of work to do.