RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.79] [Fujino]

[Barcuiii]

You know what would be the "good" ending?

Ending 1 (Asuna Nymptho Path)

* Inoda corrupts Asuna to such an extent that she becomes a nymph, and finds someone muscular fkboy who's even better in bed like the guy that Kirito sees fking Asuna in his dream in FOG (could be real life version of admin).

* Asuna cheats on Inoda with him behind his back (just like she did with kirito), then leaves Indoa for him while claiming he isn't worthy enough for her thus breaking him altogether and karma coming to bite him back. Asuna is now corrupted beyong repair

* Kirito gets to know about Asuna's infidelity at the end, breaks up, gets together with Suguha (or some new character which isn't a biyach) and ends up leaving for USA leaving this mess behind.


================== Alternative Ending (Kirito revenge path) =======================

* Kirito gets to know about Asuna's infidelity and also finds out Liz is the one who played a key role in breaking up him and Asuna, so he devices a plan.

* He pretends to get together with Liz, fk her brains out and makes her fall for him like crazy, makes her his biyach and then asks liz to meet him hinting he might propose her, he also calls up Asuna to the same spot (with her also thinking its Kirito's proposal).

* At the meeting spot he tells Liz that he knew aout her and Inodas plan for Asuna breakup, tells Asuna that he knows about her infidelity and that Liz and Inoda were manipulating her from the beginning, tells her that Inoda was just using her body and tells her about Inoda and Liz affair and the blog and that how it was all pre planned.

* He also breaks up with Liz telling he never loved her and it was all to teach her a lesson, Liz gets exposed in front of Kirito and Asuna, thus breaking Liz altogether.

* Asuna, realising her mistake wants to get back together but Kirito leaves her for someone else and leaves for US, leaving her heartbroken and devastated, with no one left around her.

* As for Inoda, Kirito hacks Inoda's computer, finds illegal stuff and calls cops on him which get him arrested.

This ending complements the current narrative and Inoda, Asuna and Liz all get their karma.

 

[4-kun]

Of course, yesterday I was trying to figure out what annoys me so much about the current state of the game and chose the best time to think before going to bed. And I came to a certain conclusion. I'm annoyed by what Asuna has become. It's not even about NTR or cheating. Asuna has turned into a hypocritical, two-faced, and cynical abomination in this game. Perhaps Fujino planned it that way, but for some reason it seems to me that this is not the case. Rather, this is a consequence of the fact that Fujino had to lead the heroine, who loves Kirito and wants to marry him, to regular infidelities. And apparently this is exactly what happened - Asuna's hypocrisy reached an unimaginable level, the feeling of guilt and any adequate perception of actions completely disappeared. In the latest update, we see that Asuna wants to end the relationship after the quarantine, but we all understand that this is just nonsense and will lead to nothing. It's just a pathetic attempt by Fujino to show that there's still something human about Asuna. As a result of my thoughts, I came to the conclusion that before, if I thought that the best outcome for Kirito would be the ending of "happy cuckold", now I just want him to get rid of Asuna. After all, even if there was no Inoda, there would be someone else, or indeed, MANY others. It's corny, I feel sorry for Kirito. It's a pity, not because Asuna is cheating on him, but because Fujino forces him to deal with a woman like Asuna in this game. And there doesn't seem to be any reason for that anymore. Asuna for Kirito "Current girlfriend" Kirito for Asuna "Opposite sex".I hope there's an ending in which Kirito, no no, doesn't win, but at least just breaks out of this mental institution.

And it's really bad when at the end of an NTR game, you think, "Ugh, thank God, man, you got out of this shit." That's not the purpose of NTR.
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Thanks to those who read it.

I have a slightly different opinion. The bottom line is the same, but it seems to me that the reason is different. The author needs to hone his story writing skills. This is especially true of the NTR genre. NTR is not just about getting laid. It's about the psychology of relationships. But here, with regard to Asuna, it seems that the author is trying to plug plot holes and she appears to us as some kind of schizophrenic with a split personality. I love you, I don't love you. I want to be with Kirito, but I spend time with Inoda. We shouldn't be doing obscenities – give me a dick to suck. Kirito and I are fine, let's finish this – I'm happy for you, just suck my dick first – yes, let's go… It feels like it's being written by different people. This story has been making my eyes blood for a long time. If it was a literary work, I would have given it up long ago. There have already been cases where the sex scenes are very well written, but there is no motivation or plot. And as a result, there is no desire to read it. I read the NTR manga recently – it turned out that the author wrote it for 2 years. 650 pages. At least 100 of them are devoted to the relationship of the main character with the heroine. And when the heroine is tricked into another relationship based on sex, readers see what the heroine has lost. But there the author asked the readers what ending you want, and the readers said – we want a good ending, otherwise it's a pity for the heroine (not the hero!). I feel sorry for the HEROINE!!! Now tell me, are there people on this forum who feel sorry for Asuna? But she was also tricked into a relationship based solely on sex. I don't think there are any such people here. There is a possibility that the author wanted just such an effect (you can't get into another person's head), but Asuna's behavior is too different from her original character. It looks as improbable as possible. In the two parts of the game, we didn't even see what was good about Asuna and Kirito's relationship. At most, I remember the fireworks in the first part of the game and that's it. That's why I don't really delve into the plot anymore. I'm waiting for the end of the game, of course, but I don't have any high expectations. I just hope that the end of the game is at least logical. Which one is not important.

Throwing in my two cents here. All of these points are valid, and it’s pretty clear that Part 2 has turned into the usual insta-corruption, much like Fujino’s previous works. While the final direction was ultimately his decision, I genuinely believe his original script was far more nuanced. Even the background events that currently lack evidence or proper scenes were probably meant to be fully implemented. I’d even go as far as to say that he might not have been opposed to making it a three-part game if that’s what it took to realize his full vision. However, external pressure forced him to choose between sticking to his original plan and losing supporters who didn’t want a slow-burn story with a broader focus on side characters—or rewriting, speeding things up, and cutting down the script to fit the audience’s demands.


And yes, I know, I criticize his writing often myself. Let’s just hope this was the experience he needed to build upon in future projects.

 

[89xcfy]

7.12 is over, is there nothing new about this menu?

 

[Kekekerkek]

There will be no part 3, Fujino said so

oh? so it means no netorase? what a let down

 

[RightHandPoppin]

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whe have a date now

What date?
For release of Asuna POV?
I'm kinda confused.

 

[Aniky Light]

I think version 0.80 will be released on Monday with the report

 

[The Jailer]

Idk if it's because i never watched SAO but for me Asuna was ALWAYS like that in the game... yes she is hypocritical but it's like that for every girl in an NTR story they are always hypocritical and in contradiction of what they think / do. (The classic "Srry my husband" while they are being fucked)

If my memory is right this scene in part 1 was at the beginning of the game and just after fucking with kirito. She was unsatisfied and masturbated. So she was always not in line with what she is thinking and what she really wants and it was really obvious to me

Now that we know that her time with oberon changed her etc... and you add all the shit that Inoda did with her since the beginning of part 1 + you add all the perks that she has now (if you read them all with each update you know that she PHYSICALLY can't resist him now) + all the ploting of Inoda, Suguha and Liz to break their couple + Kirito being the dumbest MC ever... you all that and it took version 0.80 of part 2 to see her finally fall IRL. Everything was not perfect of course but it was well done with everything he had to deal with during the production of the game

And like 900bs said it's impossible for him to make it a "realistic" ntr fall (if that even exist lol) because we are in a game format with a monthly release. Just imagine the reaction of the fans / supporter in ci-en if we get multiple update without asuna content ? Personally i would have loved it, having multiple update of just the npc storyline or suguha while Asuna is slowly corrupted could have been a banger BUT it would have been a blood bath in the comment on this site or ci-en so he made a choice and here we are..

PS : even if i do not agree with everything i read if find it very cool to have all those discussions around the game and seeing how everyone view the game

 

[Furrexx]

Where full save?

 

[anthony9915]

I think version 0.80 will be released on Monday with the report

Highly possible, really depends on how much content is in the event. Seems like its a long one from morning til what appears late at night. I am honestly okay with waiting a bit longer if it means a better quality and more CG's added.

 

[Aniky Light]

It would be nice if the ending was like that video where Kirito wonders what happened to Asuna (since she's been distant from him lately), then Suguha comes and shows him the video saying that Asuna cheated on him and then Kirito and Suguha start fucking for forgetting the past, well of course then they leave for America

 

[Aniky Light]

Asuna no longer looks human but a walking cum dump

 

[anthony9915]

Her mind is broken to lust

 

[DicksInSpace]

It would be nice if the ending was like that video where Kirito wonders what happened to Asuna (since she's been distant from him lately), then Suguha comes and shows him the video saying that Asuna cheated on him and then Kirito and Suguha start fucking for forgetting the past, well of course then they leave for America

Nah, ending should be Kirito happily married but both he and Asuna have to travel for business a bunch so either he's not home or Asuna sneaks over to Inoda. Suguha of course still visits often and drugs her Onii-chan so she can play with him while he sleeps while still using her body to control the underground along with Sinon

 

[anthony9915]

The true ending is they both admit they haven't been faithful and they become swingers....everyone is invited xD

 

[Aniky Light]

Nah, ending should be Kirito happily married but both he and Asuna have to travel for business a bunch so either he's not home or Asuna sneaks over to Inoda. Suguha of course still visits often and drugs her Onii-chan so she can play with him while he sleeps while still using her body to control the underground along with Sinon

but not even in your dreams, that bitch must stay away from him, there are no excuses for what she did and so SUGUHA X KIRITO and I said it all

 

[seifukulover]

I tried to warn you guys! I tried to tell you all that NTR was shit, and now everyone wants justice for Kirito like me. Let's all hope for the Suguha x Kirito ending so this will all be worth it!

 

[gari0410]

He needs a break from monthly updates, you can consider version 0.8 as a small update for April. Since it's 2 months away, that means by the end of May. We'll get information about the new update. I think he deserves it. As a Patreon follower, he's making progress every month while still balancing his life between work and developing his game. GOAT

 

[anthony9915]

I tried to warn you guys! I tried to tell you all that NTR was shit, and now everyone wants justice for Kirito like me. Let's all hope for the Suguha x Kirito ending so this will all be worth it!

Yea but Kirito hasn't been 100% faithful either soooo lol

 

[seifukulover]

Also, I don't like the prurience system at all. I have no idea how it's supposed to go up by any significant amount, since you only get 1 or 2 points when you look at anything. And because the prurience value is low, I'm locked out of all the good scenes. How the hell am I supposed to have 45 prurience by this point in the game??

Now Fujino is denying me my Suguha, and for what? Just let me pick the option, there's no need for points.

 

[Aniky Light]

The true ending is they both admit they haven't been faithful and they become swingers....everyone is invited xD

Asuna: Kirito, I'm sorry but I betrayed you.
*Kirito starts laughing*
Asuna: why are you laughing?
Kirito: what a coincidence, I betrayed you too hahaha
*they burst out laughing*
*then suddenly in unison* WHAT DID YOU SAY?

end of the game