This writing is hard to deal with. It's almost as bad as MTL translations. I can kinda almost ignore the random capitalization here and there, the sometimes punctuation, but there is so much misspelling mixed in that it all just attacks your brain. Like "shieeet" I get what they were trying to say, but they did it wrong. Maybe "sheeeit" or "shiiiiiiit"? Sound it out? Also hate these games where between every image, they have a slow fade to black, then fade to the next image. That doesn't add cool to your game, it is just a tactic to draw out play time when you can't create enough content. Basic spellcheck would probably do a lot of good, and maybe even pasting the shit into an AI to ask for text corrections.