- Oct 9, 2017
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I'm not surprised that the harem protagonist is trying to build a harem. I'm saying that if the tone of all your events is stuff like handholding and staring off into the night sky as MC contemplates how he can help the sad LI through her abandonment issues, then you're not really writing a compelling corruption harem story. You're writing a romance harem story.If you examine the slaves closer, you will find that slavery is actually kind of humanitarian...
Dude, you are right that there is a lot of descriptions about how he wants and needs the LIs, but it is at the same time a lot of descriptions on how he does what he does to get what he needs, both in terms of sex and relationships and in terms of employees, even when it is very clear that this is to the detriment of the LIs. Even if we assume that he really is in love with multiple women at the same time (and not just in lust/passion), how can you be surprised that manipulating these women to do his bidding to maximise his profit and pleasure at their long term expense end with something less than optimal for them? Only the harem thing in on of itself should spell automatic bad end for the LIs from any rational perspective. It is only at sites like this that harem is considered normal and acceptable...
There's different kinds of harem protagonists. While you can argue that they're all immoral, they're obviously not all written as such for the audience. And with the amount of time the game spent having Fernando tackle their personal problems instead of just tricking or coercing them, this game obviously fell more into romantic lead than unabashed manipulator.
You can try to blame it on this website for setting unrealistic expections but you still have to ask yourself these questions. If that was the goal all along then why wait until the end to spring it on the audience? Why not have events 1-9 for each girl better reflect the true objective? Why not have him at least think stuff like "Tropicali a pit stop for the dead? This bitch is loco, no wonder all her friends left. Thank god for that ass." as he whispers all these sweet nothings to them?
Even if you think that harems are inherently wrong, it's still not sensibly written. There is a clear mismatch of themes here.
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