This game is pretty well done. I like the attention to detail with the movie rentals. The story makes sense and the lore is immersive.
I have been playing with Dylan/Daniela and I think I found a couple of bugs. When attempting to buy the Gym pass as Daniela, you get into a dead end (luckily you can just restart in your last game point so you don't lose any progress). Also, when asking the secretary for your next sale to not ask for a demonstration, it looks like if the sale is a "quick sale", they still ask for a demonstration sometimes...
I like that you can repeat the lemonade stand event on weekends, and the stripper event at the bar. It would be cool if you could repeat some of the other sales events without having to make a sale first (But that's not much of a hassle).
Anyways, pretty great job! Thanks for the game!