VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Sadowdark]

That's not playing with ass ..what I meant was a progress towards anal just in case if he wants to include it. I guess everyone groped Ana's ass even tim and Dale on their introduction...beside Marcel and Leonard... That's why I guess just in case if MP decided to put someone away from sex scene with Ana from main antagonists list in future, those might be Marcel and Leonard. Even if he ask for vote, those 2 will be the lowest just because he didn't develop anything spicy in their storyline in previous updates. and not much of a screen time has been given to them corruption wise...sad to see the only bbc option for Ana is faded and superseded by threesome fantasies with Tim n Dale and they also won't get her.

But Marcel is a side character to satisfy the Big Black Dick fetish. Just like Chip and Deal are side characters that have no impact on the main plot Lonard's underpants man will also not be part of the main story rather he will have one thing to play in the main story and then disappear. .

 

[Sadowdark]

t's interesting what the MP said, that Anna may have new conditions, I wonder how they work?

 

[Couto25]

But Marcel is a side character to satisfy the Big Black Dick fetish. Just like Chip and Deal are side characters that have no impact on the main plot Lonard's underpants man will also not be part of the main story rather he will have one thing to play in the main story and then disappear. .

He's the one who knows Alexia info..He can be the main guy provided if he would have given screen time..Now that's on MP...Right not it's going via Leonard path for proof..and that gym trainer storyline is stuck too...Ana didnt respond to him since Sunday I guess where Marcel asked Ana to be her gym trainer..and after that Ana didn't went to gym. Obviously MArcel is not a MC but he was one of the main antagonists of the story where we were asked to vote after CH1. Like Rob that has nothing to do with David cheating storyline and he was forcefully introduced in between Leonard, Chris story about catching Alexia to satisfy massage and seducing neighbours fantasy, Marcel already was the main antagonist who knows Alexia and been blackmailed by Kendra and he would have given info to Ana about Alexia if he wanted to show his path storyline. We'll see. I still prefer Marcel path over Rob anytime story wise.

 

[fapzoner69018]

If mp would've given free time to the artist to render with a ready script we would've had 2 updates by now ..

 

[daddy6923]

If mp would've given free time to the artist to render with a ready script we would've had 2 updates by now ..

Doesn’t matter , he doesn’t care about his subscribers

 

[MZy321]

The old fish doesn't have a van, if anything, it's a pickupThe old fish reminds me of old horror movies. About a nice lonely psychopathic old man picking up a stupid young bimbo waiting for a ride somewhere on the highway..

After all, an old fisherman can't afford to buy a van on a janitor's salary.

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Old fish: I'll pull into a side street and get ready to meet Anna, I have plenty of time until nightfall. Time to masturbate to the pictures of Anna that I took at the pool.
Phone signal Drrrrr
Old fish:Who the hell is calling and bothering me? It's that psycho bitch Kendra, I wonder what she wants?
Old fish: gets a call from Kendra
Kendra says: we'll be at the club with Anna, Blue Lagoon, I'll send you the address, wait behind the club, I'll show you her, when I get her really drunk, I'll bring that bitch to you, you can do whatever you want with her, just don't screw anything up and record evidence for me.
Old fish says: I can come to the club ?
Kendra says angry: you're a total idiot, listen to what I'm saying because I won't repeat it, okay?
Old fish says: Yes Yes
Kendra hung up
Old fish says: angry Yes, stupid bitch, Kendra, I'll pay for this
Old fish : started masturbating to Kendra's photos. And here you go,
Old fish, he stained his pants with cum. Fuck Fuck, how do I look, maybe it'll dry by night

Only in an adult game would an old janitor have any chance with Ana. Hank is also old, but at least he has something to offer. The pathetic Marvin has nothing.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

He's the one who knows Alexia info..He can be the main guy provided if he would have given screen time..Now that's on MP...Right not it's going via Leonard path for proof..and that gym trainer storyline is stuck too...Ana didnt respond to him since Sunday I guess where Marcel asked Ana to be her gym trainer..and after that Ana didn't went to gym. Obviously MArcel is not a MC but he was one of the main antagonists of the story where we were asked to vote after CH1. Like Rob that has nothing to do with David cheating storyline and he was forcefully introduced in between Leonard, Chris story about catching Alexia to satisfy massage and seducing neighbours fantasy, Marcel already was the main antagonist who knows Alexia and been blackmailed by Kendra and he would have given info to Ana about Alexia if he wanted to show his path storyline. We'll see. I still prefer Marcel path over Rob anytime story wise.

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There are a lot of things about Marcel that's kind of up in the air.

Yes Mr. Palmer says Marcel has a role in the game but hasn't mentioned what that is.

Marcel has two problems with regards to the story and overall plot if he and Anna get involved. First is one of timing of when where and how they get together and how such a relationship affects the rest of the male characters paths; second is why? It's established that Anna easily gets flustered in erotic situations (Tim and Dale). That kind of helps move that side event along, but there are already a lot of events within the week. Third, how would Marcel help evolve Anna's character? Timing, timing is everything to the whole story.

It would be unplausible if Chris and Anna should meet again that she doesn't get plowed unless where they meet is in a public setting... But fourth issue with Marcel is in order to really make whatever happens to have to have an update just to set up that part of the story. But if there is going to be an Anna/Marcel connection, Mr. Palmer has to start slowly working him in now; otherwise, it might be too clunky just to pause the flow of the game to add Marcel to the list.

Honestly, it would be a wiser move to make Marcel a character. That would mean there would be fewer Kendra/Anna lunch dates since with a baby the only real time to "train" would be during lunch time. Right now, all Marcel is, is a useful plot tool.

 

[Couto25]

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There are a lot of things about Marcel that's kind of up in the air.

Yes Mr. Palmer says Marcel has a role in the game but hasn't mentioned what that is.

Marcel has two problems with regards to the story and overall plot if he and Anna get involved. First is one of timing of when where and how they get together and how such a relationship affects the rest of the male characters paths; second is why? It's established that Anna easily gets flustered in erotic situations (Tim and Dale). That kind of helps move that side event along, but there are already a lot of events within the week. Third, how would Marcel help evolve Anna's character? Timing, timing is everything to the whole story.

It would be unplausible if Chris and Anna should meet again that she doesn't get plowed unless where they meet is in a public setting... But fourth issue with Marcel is in order to really make whatever happens to have to have an update just to set up that part of the story. But if there is going to be an Anna/Marcel connection, Mr. Palmer has to start slowly working him in now; otherwise, it might be too clunky just to pause the flow of the game to add Marcel to the list.

Honestly, it would be a wiser move to make Marcel a character. That would mean there would be fewer Kendra/Anna lunch dates since with a baby the only real time to "train" would be during lunch time. Right now, all Marcel is, is a useful plot tool.

The thing is I just feel like Marcel/Leonard/Jake could have played much more important role for corrupting Ana as either they fit in David cheating storyline or they fit in Kendra corruption plot. Rob has nothing to do with anything. He's just a neighbour who doesn't even know how to massage lol. He is not even David's friend or office colleague. And Rob has no info about anything related to David cheating. He's just like a mediator between Leonard and Ana via Chris. So it satisfy neighbour seduction fantasy... MP indirectly linked Rob story via Chris, Leonard in David cheating path where finally Rob is taking advantage of it having half of the info.

Tim/David has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or Kendra plot too. They didn't even made an appearance or being mentioned in Ana's office storyline in the first 2 chapters. They just jumped inbetween ch3 and started groping Ana's ass from their first introductory episode lol. I just feel like MP has given advantage to Rob, Tim and Dale even when they doesn't fit in David cheating storyline plot or Kendra's office corruption plot but they have groping scene with Ana, making moves on Ana over other antagonists like Leonard, Marcel and Jake those who actually have something to do with main storyline plots. And that's why they got more votes because they have given corruption screen time of groping n massaging and forcibly made to fit in the main storyline even when they don't fit.

If MP would have showed like Marcel training in gym with Ana and touching her ....or Jake/Leonard taking advantage of Ana because of the roles or info that they have in the story and then asked for votes, I m sure people would have voted for Marcel /Jake/Leonard and they fits in the main plot too...it would have made more sense.. But anyways, it is what it is. Lol all depends on MP. Now I guess these 3 will be on top 3 characters that might not even reach to sex lol ....like if MP asked for vote for 3 antagonist with whom we don't want to see Ana with..then Marcel Jake and Leonard will be gone as they don't even touch Ana yet lol. People will think that they will take alot of time with MP slow corruption way to reach to sex so remove these 3 and continue with other characters.

 

[shadowking99]

Fellas, can someone help me with a game where there is a brother and sister gets promoted as a police/investigating officer. There was no sexual content though. Its a female protag story as far as I remember.

 

[Edward simon]

Chris is the only person who got what he wanted from anna . But unfortunately devloper is building chemistry with other characters which will take time . He should have first finish with chris and anna then move on with other character.

 

[daddy6923]

Can anyone predict the events of the following update?
MP is somewhat predictable

 

[wonderofu_]

Can anyone predict the events of the following update?
MP is somewhat predictable

he actually PM-ed me the other day about summary of the upcoming update but I promised him not to tell the others. sorry.

 

[Davidleene]

former democratic current republican here,
humble request to Mr_Palmer to release a teaser or 2 this week because his game-audience chemistry is plumming

 

[AlfredBundy4]

Chris is the only person who got what he wanted from anna . But unfortunately devloper is building chemistry with other characters which will take time . He should have first finish with chris and anna then move on with other character.

Yes and I've been writing dissertation-sized posts about why that makes the most sense narratively and sexually. For them to suddenly stop makes no sense on any level.
Yet, it seems (based on takes here) that he's going the AWAM "everyone levels up equally" route that makes zero sense and ruins the narrative pace for anyone with half a brain.

I'd like everyone to be wrong but we'll see.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

The thing is I just feel like Marcel/Leonard/Jake could have played much more important role for corrupting Ana as either they fit in David cheating storyline or they fit in Kendra corruption plot. Rob has nothing to do with anything. He's just a neighbour who doesn't even know how to massage lol. He is not even David's friend or office colleague. And Rob has no info about anything related to David cheating. He's just like a mediator between Leonard and Ana via Chris. So it satisfy neighbour seduction fantasy... MP indirectly linked Rob story via Chris, Leonard in David cheating path where finally Rob is taking advantage of it having half of the info.

Tim/David has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or Kendra plot too. They didn't even made an appearance or being mentioned in Ana's office storyline in the first 2 chapters. They just jumped inbetween ch3 and started groping Ana's ass from their first introductory episode lol. I just feel like MP has given advantage to Rob, Tim and Dale even when they doesn't fit in David cheating storyline plot or Kendra's office corruption plot but they have groping scene with Ana, making moves on Ana over other antagonists like Leonard, Marcel and Jake those who actually have something to do with main storyline plots. And that's why they got more votes because they have given corruption screen time of groping n massaging and forcibly made to fit in the main storyline even when they don't fit.

If MP would have showed like Marcel training in gym with Ana and touching her ....or Jake/Leonard taking advantage of Ana because of the roles or info that they have in the story and then asked for votes, I m sure people would have voted for Marcel /Jake/Leonard and they fits in the main plot too...it would have made more sense.. But anyways, it is what it is. Lol all depends on MP. Now I guess these 3 will be on top 3 characters that might not even reach to sex lol ....like if MP asked for vote for 3 antagonist with whom we don't want to see Ana with..then Marcel Jake and Leonard will be gone as they don't even touch Ana yet lol. People will think that they will take alot of time with MP slow corruption way to reach to sex so remove these 3 and continue with other characters.

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The thing is I just feel like Marcel/Leonard/Jake could have played much more important role for corrupting Ana as either they fit in David cheating storyline or they fit in Kendra corruption plot. Rob has nothing to do with anything. He's just a neighbour who doesn't even know how to massage lol. He is not even David's friend or office colleague. And Rob has no info about anything related to David cheating. He's just like a mediator between Leonard and Ana via Chris. So it satisfy neighbour seduction fantasy... MP indirectly linked Rob story via Chris, Leonard in David cheating path where finally Rob is taking advantage of it having half of the info. Of Jake and Chris that detracts to the story is the fact they have anacondas living in their trousers, or the whole "cock worship" trope found in 99% of games. If Marcel is added to Anna's menu, would he be anaconda owner number 3? Don't get me wrong adding Marcel as a MC would really be a good fit in the game-- its already very plausible Anna gets aroused with attention, erotic situations, and has self-control issues. So a Marcel hitting on Anna... oh hell yah that would work without much effort to build a back story! Plus, it (Marcel/Anna) has a story ending that goes like: Even though Anna cheats with x, y, and z, somehow David forgives her, and 9 months in the future Anna and David are in a delivery room expecting their second child and in coming to the world is Marcel jr.

Tim/David has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or Kendra plot too. They didn't even made an appearance or being mentioned in Ana's office storyline in the first 2 chapters. They just jumped inbetween ch3 and started groping Ana's ass from their first introductory episode lol. I just feel like MP has given advantage to Rob, Tim and Dale even when they doesn't fit in David cheating storyline plot or Kendra's office corruption plot but they have groping scene with Ana, making moves on Ana over other antagonists like Leonard, Marcel and Jake those who actually have something to do with main storyline plots. And that's why they got more votes because they have given corruption screen time of groping n massaging and forcibly made to fit in the main storyline even when they don't fit. ummmmm...? Kendra did tell Timothy/Dale that Anna was a little hot slut which emboldened them in the break room to be a little flirty with her. It's when Anna bends over the counter that sets those two in motion. It's fair to assume Kenda is telling every guy in the building about Anna. And serious that whole angle and scene worked to perfection as a story narrative. Two unheard of losers we didn't know existed show up and so clearly help evolve our understanding of Anna's character. Now MP can do whatever he wants with Timothy/Dale in the rest of the game, and it would work.

The Robinson thing... that's a hard angle to work around in the story. Back in earlier chapters, a pregnant Anna gets blindsided with a titty message from the neighborhood stud wannabe. The only problems with Robinson are twofold. First there is a lot of content that distances the whole titty message so it's like a distant memory. Second, how Anna and Robinson interact with each other. It would have been better if Anna didn't call out Robinson's intentions to his face, but let Robinson do his thing letting Robinson think he is seducing Anna...sure inner monolog from Anna would help move the scene along but... Anyhow Robinson could be that hard edge to Anna's cheating because that path could be the one that Anna Chooses to go to his house (scared... excited... uncertain...) knowing it's going to happen.

With Chris... a pissed off Anna calls him over for a romp... or a stupid Anna thinking she's in control gets snake bit...
Hank... daddy Hank treats his little girl...
Marvin... dirty old man lets Anna tease him too much and the situation goes south...
Jake (weakest path of them all) ... it's just Jake, pretty boy has an office fling with a coworker ...
Leonard... Captain Marvel to the rescue because he is the only one with enough evidence to save Anna/David's marriage

If MP would have showed like Marcel training in gym with Ana and touching her ....or Jake/Leonard taking advantage of Ana because of the roles or info that they have in the story and then asked for votes, I m sure people would have voted for Marcel /Jake/Leonard and they fits in the main plot too...it would have made more sense.. But anyways, it is what it is. Lol all depends on MP. Now I guess these 3 will be on top 3 characters that might not even reach to sex lol ....like if MP asked for vote for 3 antagonist with whom we don't want to see Ana with..then Marcel Jake and Leonard will be gone as they don't even touch Ana yet lol. People will think that they will take alot of time with MP slow corruption way to reach to sex so remove these 3 and continue with other characters. The whole game is damn good.

The best part is MP has so many possible moves to make with his characters and all of them would be creditable and plausible. Marcel... yep. Be it a first training session with Anna for Marcel to find out how sensitive Anna is... a second session with a more bold but careful Marcel until Anna accidently responds to some flatter and flirting that puts them on the table as a possibility... a third session to where its BBC this or that or interracial this or that...or just two humans mutually interested in each other one younger MILF thing--however MP would want to take it if at all.

Timothy/Dale is really the only real plausible 3-some angle

And those are just the bit characters, not the MCs! It's amazing how MP has made a ho-hum trope of a cheating wife story into something this good

 

[Couto25]

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The thing is I just feel like Marcel/Leonard/Jake could have played much more important role for corrupting Ana as either they fit in David cheating storyline or they fit in Kendra corruption plot. Rob has nothing to do with anything. He's just a neighbour who doesn't even know how to massage lol. He is not even David's friend or office colleague. And Rob has no info about anything related to David cheating. He's just like a mediator between Leonard and Ana via Chris. So it satisfy neighbour seduction fantasy... MP indirectly linked Rob story via Chris, Leonard in David cheating path where finally Rob is taking advantage of it having half of the info. Of Jake and Chris that detracts to the story is the fact they have anacondas living in their trousers, or the whole "cock worship" trope found in 99% of games. If Marcel is added to Anna's menu, would he be anaconda owner number 3? Don't get me wrong adding Marcel as a MC would really be a good fit in the game-- its already very plausible Anna gets aroused with attention, erotic situations, and has self-control issues. So a Marcel hitting on Anna... oh hell yah that would work without much effort to build a back story! Plus, it (Marcel/Anna) has a story ending that goes like: Even though Anna cheats with x, y, and z, somehow David forgives her, and 9 months in the future Anna and David are in a delivery room expecting their second child and in coming to the world is Marcel jr.

Tim/David has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or Kendra plot too. They didn't even made an appearance or being mentioned in Ana's office storyline in the first 2 chapters. They just jumped inbetween ch3 and started groping Ana's ass from their first introductory episode lol. I just feel like MP has given advantage to Rob, Tim and Dale even when they doesn't fit in David cheating storyline plot or Kendra's office corruption plot but they have groping scene with Ana, making moves on Ana over other antagonists like Leonard, Marcel and Jake those who actually have something to do with main storyline plots. And that's why they got more votes because they have given corruption screen time of groping n massaging and forcibly made to fit in the main storyline even when they don't fit. ummmmm...? Kendra did tell Timothy/Dale that Anna was a little hot slut which emboldened them in the break room to be a little flirty with her. It's when Anna bends over the counter that sets those two in motion. It's fair to assume Kenda is telling every guy in the building about Anna. And serious that whole angle and scene worked to perfection as a story narrative. Two unheard of losers we didn't know existed show up and so clearly help evolve our understanding of Anna's character. Now MP can do whatever he wants with Timothy/Dale in the rest of the game, and it would work.

The Robinson thing... that's a hard angle to work around in the story. Back in earlier chapters, a pregnant Anna gets blindsided with a titty message from the neighborhood stud wannabe. The only problems with Robinson are twofold. First there is a lot of content that distances the whole titty message so it's like a distant memory. Second, how Anna and Robinson interact with each other. It would have been better if Anna didn't call out Robinson's intentions to his face, but let Robinson do his thing letting Robinson think he is seducing Anna...sure inner monolog from Anna would help move the scene along but... Anyhow Robinson could be that hard edge to Anna's cheating because that path could be the one that Anna Chooses to go to his house (scared... excited... uncertain...) knowing it's going to happen.

With Chris... a pissed off Anna calls him over for a romp... or a stupid Anna thinking she's in control gets snake bit...
Hank... daddy Hank treats his little girl...
Marvin... dirty old man lets Anna tease him too much and the situation goes south...
Jake (weakest path of them all) ... it's just Jake, pretty boy has an office fling with a coworker ...
Leonard... Captain Marvel to the rescue because he is the only one with enough evidence to save Anna/David's marriage

If MP would have showed like Marcel training in gym with Ana and touching her ....or Jake/Leonard taking advantage of Ana because of the roles or info that they have in the story and then asked for votes, I m sure people would have voted for Marcel /Jake/Leonard and they fits in the main plot too...it would have made more sense.. But anyways, it is what it is. Lol all depends on MP. Now I guess these 3 will be on top 3 characters that might not even reach to sex lol ....like if MP asked for vote for 3 antagonist with whom we don't want to see Ana with..then Marcel Jake and Leonard will be gone as they don't even touch Ana yet lol. People will think that they will take alot of time with MP slow corruption way to reach to sex so remove these 3 and continue with other characters. The whole game is damn good.

The best part is MP has so many possible moves to make with his characters and all of them would be creditable and plausible. Marcel... yep. Be it a first training session with Anna for Marcel to find out how sensitive Anna is... a second session with a more bold but careful Marcel until Anna accidently responds to some flatter and flirting that puts them on the table as a possibility... a third session to where its BBC this or that or interracial this or that...or just two humans mutually interested in each other one younger MILF thing--however MP would want to take it if at all.

Timothy/Dale is really the only real plausible 3-some angle

And those are just the bit characters, not the MCs! It's amazing how MP has made a ho-hum trope of a cheating wife story into something this good

With Chris Marcel and Jake... it's not about cock worship...it's about what role they're playing...one is David's best friend who has an eye on Ana and will bargain kind of divorce settlement for both of them as per his own needs..Jake is associate of Ana during work guided by kendra ...he has different feelings in different paths..and Marcel knows Alexia and got blackmailed by kendra. These are important characters in main storyline...and these characters roles can be changed by the way we play them..like Chris, Jake and Marcel can be best friend for Ana to help her out in faithful path. Where we saw Chris n Jake are changing their mind about Ana already in faithful path...but Marcel story is stuck. Cock worship is different things..Marvin , grant got big cock in this VN provided by MP. Rob neighbour seducing role, I don't see fit anywhere, neither he has any info to help Ana to save marriage in faithful path/ he was not even present in the bar when David/Alexia met. I am not saying anything against massage scene or inner dialogue but story wise, his role is not important. Neither he is affected by kendra. He's like tim/Dale of Ana's /David personal life who's horny for Ana but couldn't contribute much towards main storyline unless his character is forced in between Leonard/Chris path. Rob role feels more like pushed in the storyline to fulfill massage fantasies. He has different storyline apart from main one. And his corruption/seduction for Ana is based on whatever he heard from his other friends who can directly seduce Ana on the basis of proof they got....like Leonard can approach Ana directly telling her info whatever he has. Marcel can approach her directly..but MP designed it that way where people who have info will approach Rob and he take advantage of these half heard rumours.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

With Chris Marcel and Jake... it's not about cock worship...it's about what role they're playing...one is David's best friend who has an eye on Ana and will bargain kind of divorce settlement for both of them as per his own needs..Jake is associate of Ana during work guided by kendra ...he has different feelings in different paths..and Marcel knows Alexia and got blackmailed by kendra. These are important characters in main storyline...and these characters roles can be changed by the way we play them..like Chris, Jake and Marcel can be best friend for Ana to help her out in faithful path. Where we saw Chris n Jake are changing their mind about Ana already in faithful path...but Marcel story is stuck. Cock worship is different things..Marvin , grant got big cock in this VN provided by MP. Rob neighbour seducing role, I don't see fit anywhere, neither he has any info to help Ana to save marriage in faithful path/ he was not even present in the bar when David/Alexia met. I am not saying anything against massage scene or inner dialogue but story wise, his role is not important. Neither he is affected by kendra. He's like tim/Dale of Ana's /David personal life who's horny for Ana but couldn't contribute much towards main storyline unless his character is forced in between Leonard/Chris path. Rob role feels more like pushed in the storyline to fulfill massage fantasies. He has different storyline apart from main one. And his corruption/seduction for Ana is based on whatever he heard from his other friends who can directly seduce Ana on the basis of proof they got....like Leonard can approach Ana directly telling her info whatever he has. Marcel can approach her directly..but MP designed it that way where people who have info will approach Rob and he take advantage of these half heard rumours.

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With Chris Marcel and Jake... it's not about cock worship...it's about what role they're playing...one is David's best friend who {who happens to be hung like a horse} has an eye on Ana and will bargain kind of divorce settlement for both of them as per his own needs..Jake is associate of Ana during work guided by kendra {Who is also hung like a horse}...he has different feelings in different paths..and Marcel knows Alexia and got blackmailed by kendra. These are important characters in main storyline...and these characters roles can be changed by the way we play them..like Chris, Jake and Marcel can be best friend for Ana to help her out in faithful path {true and possible}. Where we saw Chris n Jake are changing their mind about Ana already in faithful path...but Marcel story is stuck {if there is a Marcel that one seems more like entertainment value that can or not be in the game}. Cock worship is different things..Marvin , grant got big cock in this VN provided by MP. Rob neighbour seducing role, I don't see fit anywhere {it kind of works in that it introduces us to what Anna's personality is like... true in the beginning it was underwhelming... more of a character plot build}, neither he has any info to help Ana to save marriage in faithful path/ he was not even present in the bar when David/Alexia met. {very true... he is just pretending to be a useful idiot} I am not saying anything against massage scene or inner dialogue but story wise, his role is not important {the story needs a place and time when Anna herself causes things to happen by her own choice and Robinson seems to fit... depending how the other paths unfold it could be someone other than Robinson that fills that role... I'd say he is the second weakest character thus far}. Neither he is affected by kendra. He's like tim/Dale of Ana's /David personal life who's horny for Ana but couldn't contribute much towards main storyline unless his character is forced in between Leonard/Chris path {it's a good plot device to have other actors with similar intension toward Anna and so far, it works... The thing about Anna before all this started was she was already a flawed person remaining faithful only because she is married. Kendra is just the one that opened Pandor's box}. Rob role feels more like pushed in the storyline to fulfill massage fantasies. {Never would have thought that would be a fantasy... but it is a big world where just about anything floats a person's boat} He has different storyline apart from main one. And his corruption/seduction for Ana is based on whatever he heard from his other friends who can directly seduce Ana on the basis of proof they got {Mr. Palmer keeps reminding us that it's not your conventional corruption game where an innocent woman falls to the evil manipulations of others, but a game where she is vulnerable to her own desires and failings looking for excuses to let the inner Anna out--just happens that those around her are too willing to get their rocks off at Anna's expense} ....like Leonard can approach Ana directly telling her info whatever he has. Marcel can approach her directly..but MP designed it that way where people who have info will approach Rob and he take advantage of these half heard rumours.

**it's just odd we can't really point to a "good guy" at this stage

 

[Sadowdark]

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There are a lot of things about Marcel that's kind of up in the air.

Yes Mr. Palmer says Marcel has a role in the game but hasn't mentioned what that is.

Marcel has two problems with regards to the story and overall plot if he and Anna get involved. First is one of timing of when where and how they get together and how such a relationship affects the rest of the male characters paths; second is why? It's established that Anna easily gets flustered in erotic situations (Tim and Dale). That kind of helps move that side event along, but there are already a lot of events within the week. Third, how would Marcel help evolve Anna's character? Timing, timing is everything to the whole story.

It would be unplausible if Chris and Anna should meet again that she doesn't get plowed unless where they meet is in a public setting... But fourth issue with Marcel is in order to really make whatever happens to have to have an update just to set up that part of the story. But if there is going to be an Anna/Marcel connection, Mr. Palmer has to start slowly working him in now; otherwise, it might be too clunky just to pause the flow of the game to add Marcel to the list.

Honestly, it would be a wiser move to make Marcel a character. That would mean there would be fewer Kendra/Anna lunch dates since with a baby the only real time to "train" would be during lunch time. Right now, all Marcel is, is a useful plot tool.

Marcel is a big black dick fetish. He told MP that Marcel is a side character. And he won't have a big role in the main plot.

 

[Sadowdark]

If MP would have showed like Marcel training in gym with Ana and touching her ....or Jake/Leonard taking advantage of Ana because of the roles or info that they have in the story and then asked for votes, I m sure people would have voted for Marcel /Jake/Leonard and they fits in the main plot too...it would have made more sense.. But anyways, it is what it is. Lol all depends on MP. Now I guess these 3 will be on top 3 characters that might not even reach to sex lol ....like if MP asked for vote for 3 antagonist with whom we don't want to see Ana with..then Marcel Jake and Leonard will be gone as they don't even touch Ana yet lol. People will think that they will take alot of time with MP slow corruption way to reach to sex so remove these 3 and continue with other characters.

Wait until Anna gets the green light to exercise from Dr. Carol. Marcel will become her personal trainer.

 

[Davidleene]

Please Mr_Palmer give us a teaser!