Technically they are not shotas anymore because they cum. You don't cum until you are 13/15, and for the 9/18 months it is still transparent and very low in ammount until you start doing real white volume, and that happens in the 14/16 age gap. Yes, you orgasm before that, but nothing comes out of the pipi.
I would also talk about the cock sizes, as the cock grows also with the androgens that makes cum posible, they are synced, but I understand he is doing an overall cock inflation to the novel starting with Dylan pool size, then the stupid size of DeShawn (the sauna version was good but the shower was ridiculous), and now the teenagers (previous shotas).
Overall very bad update. He is afraid to do some real sex because he is starting to fear the consequences on doing under age porn, but at the same time his need to increase in monthly payments had made him go shady with cliff hangers and shit, but at the same time he remains milking and stale for at least a year and a half (min 5 updates) before "something" really happens.
The overall quality time dedicated to the novel is going down. The text was boring and really bad, all those lines after lines after lines of reading about hormones and lingerie, soooo much unnecesary filling to make the update go for months instead of mixing it with the other and moving forward to interesting stuff. Sophia remains stupid "I put boundaries that last less than 15 minutes to anyone" kills Sophia, she is so fucking dumb at this point that she is not relatable, from godess to average stupid bitch, the destrucction of the main character.
The other thing I saw is that he is planning to increase the milking. He "introduced" another character, Leah. He introduced another plot (his boyfriend), and he is planning to waste time on that plot. He basically emptied the house and left a chance of Sophia + Leah alone with the "forgotten item", just to fuel that plot that no one asked for in a novel that is already overflowing in useless plots.
Unless "the guy" Leah wants to fuck is Aidern, or Zac, or Sam, or one of the pijama party girls boyfriend, or some plot twist like that, and when she returns home it's really worth something, or this guy is actually laughing on absolute everyones face with this shit novel and deserves a real life visit lol. I wonder how he looks like, my bet is a fat beard weirdo, specially after reading his ideas of gym people through Sophia's words on the bycicle, classical nerd dream that bombshells would think like him about hot strong men hahaha.
