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Don't wanna be that guy but technically your crush being taken away isn't a new form of ntr, its actually known as BSS ntr in doujins and shit iirc
Not denying its ntr though, it definitely is, just someone you cherish being taken away/fuckedcan be considered ntr, even if its a mom/sister etc
Which would be great to see lol, probably not MC's cuz he's flown to Japan but cucking other people with their moms/sisters, or even other people's crushes
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Mom sister is definitely ntr cause a relationship is established, it goes in to that Bully ntr territory form aswell, I am a bit tired with this Crush being taken is considered NTR argument, maybe I am too old of a man of culture to want an established or atleast unspoken relationship between the guy and the girl even if the relationship isn't official, anyways I give up with that and simply re-establish that the NTR in this game when implemented will be of this kind (Crush NTR'd) but not if u are in an official relationship with her.Don't wanna be that guy but technically your crush being taken away isn't a new form of ntr, its actually known as BSS ntr in doujins and shit iirc
Not denying its ntr though, it definitely is, just someone you cherish being taken away/fuckedcan be considered ntr, even if its a mom/sister etc
Which would be great to see lol, probably not MC's cuz he's flown to Japan but cucking other people with their moms/sisters, or even other people's crushes
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*I mean, why in the world would the younger sister not only remain in the same program but then to proceed to travel to the same area of a foreign country where the elder sister vanished? I hope I'm wrong and there's some explanation to make it make sense though, as characters being that intentionally stupid so early in the story is usually a red flag.
See my next post further down the page, I posted too soon lol
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As the story synopsis goes. Julie is there to look for her elder sister with her best friend. It is their alternative motive to be in Japan. This is the start of the story and mainly focusses on the bad guys and what their up to. As we continue in updates there will be more and more reveals of why certain stuff happens.
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So no matter what happens the MC's love interest will be getting taken and fucked against her will by other men? In a story about brainwashing, corruption, and sex slavery?
That's a damned shame, the foundation of the narrative that's been laid out so far has the potential to be a pretty great VN. Granted, there's plenty of possible pitfalls to screw up this sort of story it sounds like the plan is already to steer the plot straight into one. If it was just that she gets kidnapped and trafficked you could fix that with some decent writing but the brainwashing/corruption angle makes coming up with a satisfying solution much more challenging (if not borderline impossible).
And frankly, saying that the main love interest being taken and brainwashed was an absolutely necessary plot point rather than it just being a decision you made means that you either wrote yourself into a corner already or it's a cheap way to excuse yourself for making that choice.
That's a damned shame, the foundation of the narrative that's been laid out so far has the potential to be a pretty great VN. Granted, there's plenty of possible pitfalls to screw up this sort of story it sounds like the plan is already to steer the plot straight into one. If it was just that she gets kidnapped and trafficked you could fix that with some decent writing but the brainwashing/corruption angle makes coming up with a satisfying solution much more challenging (if not borderline impossible).
And frankly, saying that the main love interest being taken and brainwashed was an absolutely necessary plot point rather than it just being a decision you made means that you either wrote yourself into a corner already or it's a cheap way to excuse yourself for making that choice.
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Ok, this is remastered yeah?
I don't know, it still seems pretty much the same, pardon my bluntness, mess we had before. The MCs purpose is completly unclear, the options to do anything here are 2 choices in total, everything seems to be unfocused, there is some kind of buildup with the evil organisation, and everybody still has this body drawing obsession (just a side note).
I still think there is a good idea in here somewhere, but that script needs work, you need to untangel it, first have a general idea what your story is about, get your point of view character(s) in order then plan in a basic way how the story should progress.
I don't know, it still seems pretty much the same, pardon my bluntness, mess we had before. The MCs purpose is completly unclear, the options to do anything here are 2 choices in total, everything seems to be unfocused, there is some kind of buildup with the evil organisation, and everybody still has this body drawing obsession (just a side note).
I still think there is a good idea in here somewhere, but that script needs work, you need to untangel it, first have a general idea what your story is about, get your point of view character(s) in order then plan in a basic way how the story should progress.
I love how you worded your question to avoid any confusion and made it a simple yes/no but they still found a way to not answer the question being asked at all lol
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I did answer Yes, though. I did explain my reasoning but my answer was "Yes"
So not sure what you mean.
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Huh? I literally made it clear exactly what Kind of NTR is in the game dude....
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Your answer to the question was "Why would people be stringed along to paying me just because I said I don't know if there is NTR or not.
I don't lie about not knowing if the game is NTR or not, the girl in the game is your "crush". Not your wife or your girlfriend.
So if your question is, will the "crush" become a Love Doll, the answer is... Yes.
It's needed to drive the story forward."
You never answer what was asked but tipped toe around it, I will agree that this on its own makes sense as a response due to the tag system used in F95 leading to NTR having a different meaning depending on the developers. However, the question asked "Does/is your LI...or potential LI, have/are intimate/have sex etc with anyone else (expecially another male) other than the MC? It really is a VERY simple question with a VERY simple answer...yes or no?" This is aimed at the MC crush and is explicitly asking if they will have scenes with males outside the MC. You did not answer this part and instead just said they will become a love doll. So one is lead to believe that by becoming love doll that they will have sex with other people besides MC as you did not commit to a answer. And since a major of the characters are going to become love dolls, they will inevitably sleep with other males besides MC.
Just state clearly what to expect on this topic of interest and everyone can move on and the thread can go to talking about the game instead philosophical debate on what NTR truly is.
Then I will say, Yes.
The crush of MC will get fucked by others. Hope this clears up stuff better.
(Old statement, read my newer statement instead!)
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Thank you, that will clear things up for people and hopefully the thread goes into discussing the game instead of debating this issue. Not my thing personally but wish you the best on your game!
ya this game is a skip for me might as well take harem out of those tags of your dev notes as obviously the mc is going to be pathetic and only get girls after they been fucked
I see, thanks for letting me know I should skip this game. Not interested in the beta cuck shit.