VN Ren'Py The Scheme of Betrayal [v0.3] [Frxnz]

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godscoper

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damn Mc getting abused by every girl. One kisses him and knocks him out and the second one almost kisses him and cuddles with him and wants to kill him at the end.

MC alone keeps losing his memory.
 

xibuf

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i tried to play this in it's entirety but i just couldn't. the story is unintelligible. there is abundance of errors in the text. you can't change the name of the mc. this game is just not a good experience. the only good thing about this is the renders, they are very high quality. i am not sure if anyone mentioned this previously but why is the transition image a random png of ghost from call of duty?
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You can can change the name of the main character towards the end, of the update. its seems this whole thing right now was the prologue. Give it a try to finish it and let me know your thoughts.
 
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MisterNephilim

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I don't know if it is a language barrier thing or is the story so convoluted to a comedic degree. The way that Ashley just turns against the MC at the end is so out of left field that it doesn't make any sense.
 

onefingersalute

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why do i get a error when i goto pick talk to ashley or luara ? i can't pick luara but i can ashley only what gives then the error log is in fucken russian when i picked english ENGLISH ! what gives might want to look into fixing that
 

godscoper

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I don't know if it is a language barrier thing or is the story so convoluted to a comedic degree. The way that Ashley just turns against the MC at the end is so out of left field that it doesn't make any sense.
right like she was completely pretending to even like MC at all. how can you cuddle with him and throw him under the bus next thing? she only
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Teal80

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Hmm. Not sure this plot makes much sense. Certainly the main female characters dont act with the intelligence it shows on their report cards. He said he's not up to it, says he can't do it, then they blame him for not doing it. I think IQs just took a dive - does a betrayal need such stupid premise.
There will have to be some tortuous logic path to explain their behaviour. Will watch to see if the next episode but I'm not going to be hoping for much.
 
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Teal80

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He's an amateur doing this for "free", not some stephen king autor or smth...
Strawman aside... I don 't have to do a full bio search on the author to comment on the work and his situation does not change the content of the VN or my opinion of the plot.
 
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Crosaith.

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Fair. MC deserved getting knocked tf out after screwing the girls over like that. He could've gotten them killed or worse.
 

goulet1995

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what are the future tags for this and will any of them be avoidable. Visually the game looks nice but i really need some infor before id give it a try like will it be solo LI or harem if thereis going to be any lesbian or bisexual stuff and if there is can that be avoided
 

MiltonPowers

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Hmm. Not sure this plot makes much sense. Certainly the main female characters dont act with the intelligence it shows on their report cards. He said he's not up to it, says he can't do it, then they blame him for not doing it. I think IQs just took a dive - does a betrayal need such stupid premise.
There will have to be some tortuous logic path to explain their behaviour. Will watch to see if the next episode but I'm not going to be hoping for much.
It's not unusual when a Dev is setting a world for things to seem like they are not making sense, but be revealed bit by bit along the way. We don't know if the girls are acting intelligently or not, because we don't know what their true agenda is. Ashley's inner monologue in the gym bathroom and a couple of their conversations indicate that they are clearly up to something that only they know about.

Laura tells Vincent she's sorry a couple of times, but won't explain further and we know nothing yet from before the first amnesia. Was Vincent in a relationship with either or both of them? At the moment I have no idea who to trust.

There's also the hint from Norman that Ashley has something wrong in her head due to what happened with Chloe just over six months ago. Is there 2 people living in her head?

I'm prepared to run with it for now and see how it develops, the end of the current update had a feeling of it just getting started, so I'll see what the next update brings.
 
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MiltonPowers

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what are the future tags for this and will any of them be avoidable. Visually the game looks nice but i really need some infor before id give it a try like will it be solo LI or harem if thereis going to be any lesbian or bisexual stuff and if there is can that be avoided
I don't think Dev has ever confirmed if it is harem or solo paths, but my guess would be solo paths. There is a number of times that you have to choose between LIs and miss the content of the other, so it doesn't feel like harem.

And so far, apart from a couple of kisses and a flashback sex scene, everything has been avoidable.
 

MagicMan753

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It's not unusual when a Dev is setting a world for things to seem like they are not making sense, but be revealed bit by bit along the way. We don't know if the girls are acting intelligently or not, because we don't know what their true agenda is. Ashley's inner monologue in the gym bathroom and a couple of their conversations indicate that they are clearly up to something that only they know about.

Laura tells Vincent she's sorry a couple of times, but won't explain further and we know nothing yet from before the first amnesia. Was Vincent in a relationship with either or both of them? At the moment I have no idea who to trust.

There's also the hint from Norman that Ashley has something wrong in her head due to what happened with Chloe just over six months ago. Is there 2 people living in her head?

I'm prepared to run with it for now and see how it develops, the end of the current update had a feeling of it just getting started, so I'll see what the next update brings.
I haven't played yet, but it does sound a little illogical from the comments, but I am willing to give benefit of the doubt and let the story play out. If it turns out as stupid reasoning in the future, then I will complain.

Also I am a forgiving person, so as long they don't try to constantly ruin the MC and betray him, I can forgive them, as long as they show remorse.
 
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MiltonPowers

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I haven't played yet, but it does sound a little illogical from the comments, but I am willing to give benefit of the doubt and let the story play out. If it turns out as stupid reasoning in the future, then I will complain.

Also I am a forgiving person, so as long they don't try to constantly ruin the MC and betray him, I can forgive them, as long as they show remorse.
There is definitely some things that don't make sense, but personally I'm happy to let it play out and see where it goes. And same as you, I'll do my bitching then if it's something stupid or never answered.
 
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